The campus, which is believed to be a place for students to gain knowledge, but as the world gets globalized, many business centers have moved into the campus. Students enjoy the commercial environment, but some people think that the commercial environment will have negative effect to the students. I think the campus should be pure.

大學(xué)校園，被人們認為是學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)知識的地方，但是隨著全球化，很多商業(yè)中心搬進了校園。學(xué)生享受著商業(yè)環(huán)境，但是一些人覺得商業(yè)環(huán)境會給學(xué)生帶來負面影響。我覺得校園應(yīng)該要純凈。

On the one hand, campus is the place for students to learn the knowledge. The school should create the environment which is suitable for the students to study. Such as the school can open the shops to sell the books, or the things which are related to the study.

一方面，大學(xué)校園是學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)知識的地方。學(xué)校應(yīng)該創(chuàng)造適合學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的環(huán)境。比如學(xué)校可以開賣書的店，或者賣和學(xué)習(xí)有關(guān)的東西。

On the other hand, the commercial centers will distract students’ attention from their study. The shop, the theater and other shops have built in some campus, it makes the students can’t focus their minds, they just want to finish their class and then go shopping. The original purpose has been forgotten by the students.

另一方面，商業(yè)中心會讓學(xué)生從學(xué)習(xí)上分心。商店，電影院和其他的店在一些學(xué)校已經(jīng)建立了，這讓學(xué)生無法集中精神，他們會想要快點上完課，然后去購物。學(xué)生忘記了他們上學(xué)的初衷。

Though the commercialize of campus brings students convenience, it is not suitable to let those shops open, students’ main duty is to study and the commercialize will interfere them.

雖然校園的商業(yè)化給學(xué)生帶來了方便，但是讓這些店開在校園里是不合適的，學(xué)生的主要任務(wù)是學(xué)習(xí)，商業(yè)化會干擾他們。

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